Break My Heart With No Regrets

Tell me lies,
Because the truth is overrated.
Close my eyes,
To the reality of your ways.
Shadow my heart,
From the glow of your deceit.
Blind my love,
With the riddles that you reap.

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samueltfranklin

A strong gem of a poem. The structure is consistent and solid, and the words themselves speak of a universal truth anyone can identify with--love is blind, for better for worse. Consider trying to get this published---this feels like something which could stand a chance of getting into Rattle (check out Rattle.com)

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