Thu, 03/07/2013 - 19:07 -- avantha


United States
40° 40' 35.04" N, 73° 48' 44.9928" W

I am led to the asphalt
And blindfolded I stand
Hoping these men
Will pave the way

It is so very clear
My future is bland
Without a hand to hold again
I am a mere part of their display

And blindfolded,
I am a woman
There is one high command
That must be followed despite deign
Ready to whittle away

And blindfolded
I am blind
To the power
Obscured by
This blindfold



Wow! Very powerful poem. I like the significance of the blindfold, and its two-fold meaning.

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