Birthday

The day after the graduation

6/10 

Visited the best friend at a college house 

Got to catch up and had a spontaneous time

11 o'clock

Was told to close my eyes 

Was she going to pull a trick? What was happening?

Still heard people talking, music playing in the background 

Open your eyes now, she said

Dark night, one candle on a cake

Everyone with big smile, all sang, "Happy Birthday"

Make a wish, she said

Overjoyed, I made a wish. 

6/16

I turned 18.  

 

 

This poem is about: 
Me
My family

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