Birthday!

 

The night fill with

Stars that illuminated the sky

brightness with every different colors

which compose you

the morning sky

urge with a dark blue

    sky blue

in the midst of the peace

  I lay

for a while now I feel

empty of thought

tweek, tweek!! a squirrel

sounded in the branch

in that very best tree I lay under

      tells me about  

the thought of your special day

Happy birthday


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