Beyond Repair

Feelings diminished. Burned by friends,
hung by haters, broken by ex's,
left alone by brothers. Heard by no birds,
torched by the sun, why haven't i ended
this misery with a gun. Blame me for your sins,
punish me till breaths End, and all i wanted
was a friend.

-Cspb

Comments

lacriosa

I can feel the suffering that you're writing about. Every single feeling has touched me, and I want to give you my hand in friendship. Such a remarkable piece. Thank you for sharing it.

Shaun Poet

thanks ,.. and i appreciate that

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