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Our world


Luis Vargas

What does the cross mean?

What does the cross mean?

The cross means the sacrifice Jesus did for me

The cleansing of your sins 

The cleansing of my sins 

The crown of thorns Jesus wore

The view that Jesus saw of the soldiers betting on his garments

I get on my knees, what does the cross mean?

The cross means the faith in Christ 

The cross means the nails Jesus were hanging on

What does the cross mean?

The cross means victory over death

The cross means victory over sin

The cross means victory over the devil 

1 Corinthians 1:18

For the word of the cross is foolishness to those who are perishing, but to us who are being saved it is the power of God.


Luke 14:27

Whoever does not carry his own cross and come after Me cannot be My disciple.

The soldiers told Jesus 

If you are the son of God, come down the cross and save yourself 


Matthew 16:24

Then Jesus said to His disciples, “If anyone wishes to come after Me, he must deny himself, and take up his cross and follow Me.


What does the cross mean to me?

The cross means to me, the sacrifice of Jesus 

Everything that I said in this poem that’s what the cross means to me

I keep my head up high looking up towards the heaven

And smile at Jesus I look at his wrists and remembered what he did for me 

Thank you Lord for everything you did

Thank you for sacrificing yourself on the cross for me

For us 


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powerful poem

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ValanThia VV

Powerful .... Powerful

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Thank you for the luv and support 

pray for the ministry 

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it's about glorifying Christ Jesus 🙏🏾

Luis Vargas

Devil is Liar byt: Luis V

The devil is a liar

He wants my soul and I know it 

He’s beneath my feet 

Your a liar man

You belong in the depths of hell

I can’t wait to get to heaven and watch you burn

All those times you laughed when I was knocked down

I would laugh the minute I get to heaven knowing you are going to be burned

The devil showed up in my dream

Showed me everything I wanted 

He told me you can have all this if you give me your soul

I walk back and say nah man I’m good 

It’s not worth it 

I will work for the things I want 

With the help of my lord and savior 

I can easily step on the serpent's head if I wanted to 

Watch you bleed out and die 

But that’s not going to happen 

Because I know you won’t die 

You’ll just keep coming back with everything you got 

Yeah I admit I’m weak

I fall into temptation very easily 

At least I know how to admit unless like other people 

Some people will hide it and cover saying

Oh, I’m a christian I know how to overcome temptations

But they fall into that temptation they have struggles with

Lord take me as I am

A weak man

A man trying to walk the narrow path

A man who needs you and admits it 

The devil is a liar 

Showed me all the women I can get if I sold my soul 

I back up and say nah man 

The only woman I need is the woman God has for me 

I don’t need fleshly desires 

James 4:7 Submit yourselves therefore to God. Resist the devil, and he will flee from you.

So Devil go away now in the name of Jesus Christ 




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once again

briliance young brother......are you free to share a poem this tuesday coming up?

Luis Vargas

Depends on how much homework I have but if not I would like you to read one of them for me 

Luis Vargas

The GOAT by: Luis V

People say Tom brady is the GOAT 

Other says Lebron ,Curry or Harden is the GOAT 

You wanna know I think the GOAT is?

The GOAT is Jesus Christ 


Because he saved our lives, he sacrificed himself 

He shed his own blood 

He had flesh ripped of his body 

He wore a crown of thorns 

He was hung on by Nails 

He was hung on a tree 

He is God 

He gave us the Holy Spirit 

Man the one thing that pisses me off more 

Is that they say Jesus is part of the LGBTQ+ community 

Just because he loves everyone 

Where in the bible it specifically says in Leviticus 18:22

“You shall not lie with man as a woman that is an abomination”

So I say Jesus is the GOAT 

He wasn’t rich 

He wasn’t born into a rich family 

He didn’t have any offsprings physically 

He never got married 

And that’s because he was only here on earth for one reason 

To save us from sin

Save us from the hands of the enemy 

Save us from hell 

John 3:16 says 

“For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only begotten son that whosoever shall believeth in him shall not perish but have everlasting life.”

So Lebron, Curry, Brady, or Harden is not the GOAT

It’s our savior and creator Jesus Christ 

A poem I just wrote now 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Jesus is the G.O.A.T.-Greatest Of All Time

i always say that about Our Lord

well written poem young brother

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let me know if you're able to

Luis Vargas



We lost a good one today 

I miss you

You were one of my motivators

To reach for the stars 

You told us you were a “ruff ryder”

You told the  “Lord to give you a sign”

You told somebody “X gon’ give it to ya”

You told the hood “where the hood at?”

You told people to” party up”

You told people to “stop being greedy”

You told people to “let me fly”

You told us to “Look thru my eyes”

Man you the dawg man

Hopefully your in heaven

You gave me motivation

Now I will use that motivation to succeed in life 

I will use that motivation to prove people wrong 

RIP dawg 

You’ll be missed 

You died at 50

Only 50 more years till you could’ve reached 100 man 

You kept it real

I love you 


new poem hard to write for me as tears were dropping down my face 😔 

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we all learn from dmx to not be tormented by demons, stayed in alignment with Jesus's principles, and be authentic with God.

it is so important to value life, and be the ambassadors of Christ to be a blessings to folks

well thought out and heartfelt poem

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