Beginning of a love poem

Fri, 04/26/2013 - 11:28 -- Elladan

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22963
United States
37° 52' 35.4396" N, 78° 16' 13.422" W

Gentle fingers, simple smile,
Dancing as you go.
This world is so unworthy
Of beholding such as you.

Mine eye is blinded by your kindness,
Sweet as gentle morning dew.
I shake with your perfection -
You rearrange me, make me new.

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