Sat, 04/20/2013 - 15:25 -- alyx156


United States
34° 29' 47.4396" N, 117° 57' 36.1692" W

There I stare blank and bare where oh where am I?
At the door the say once more whats on the other side
Dragons dungeons or hollow ovens
what oh what i sigh?
can it be a canopy of wild monkey swinging from tree to tree?
please oh please tell me
uncertainty oh oh it kills kills kills me
open it they shout step back and please don't pout
I open the door wanting to know what more
and to my mild surprise
its a series of bright yellow eyes
No longer am I uncertain but the rage inside is flaring
and now I am stuck starring
and forever and ever this shall be
for forever and eternity,

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