Back Door Break

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19122
United States
39° 58' 46.2864" N, 75° 8' 44.8152" W

"You can't smoke life
With a filter,"
He said slowly;

The skinny grey serpent fingers
Snaked out from his mouth
And their rolled white womb
As they ran themselves into nothing,
Up into the pins-in-the-lungs cold.

"It ends up tasting of paper
And only making you linger
A little longer than you'd like."

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