Awake!

Awake! Awake!

Awake, Fellas!

Please, don't be fake.

Treat your wives like Queens,

Do not kiss her just to be seen!

Think with your hearts, and not your britches.

Your wives are not maids.

Do you treat them like beds that are laid?

No, no, this is not the way

That a man should treat his fiancé.

Waiting for her should not make you bored.

For a virtuous woman is most pleasing to The Lord.

Oh remember, remember what I said.

Think with your heart and not your head.

Are you even bringing home the bread?

Or would you rather feed those pigeon heads?

Do not kiss your wife just to be seen.

But rather, treat her like a Queen,

For eternity.

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