All I need

all I need is the

 

CONCRETE

in        my       mind

to

 

stop pushing,

weighing,

 

 

DOWN.

 

it does not matter to think of

their stares.

 

visions quickly sliding from one corner

to the next.

 

it does not matter to think of

their shuffling patterns

gone away from me.

 

but as the waves

 

flow

                            over

it finds itself.

 

 

 

 

it matters.

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