Absolute Stillness

Mon, 05/05/2014 - 20:06 -- getino

The stillness awaits,
in a destitute absolute,
for all its belongings
to realize the truth of no truth.

Comments

Royal Blood

10 years ago

The simplicity of your your poem gives it an unexpected sophistication. Great job :)

getino

10 years ago

Thank you, I see value in both intricate works and simplistic works. I like to change it up from time to time :)

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