Abby

At the start.

 

Her vision, sightless

Her appetite, biteless
Her scalp, hairless

Her hearing, hearless

Her skin, the palest 

Her chances, the scariest 

 

During Life.

 

Her days, dark

Her breast, removed

Her hope, lost

Her belief, damaged

Her strive, gone

Her drive, gasless

Her wish, to be gone

 

One day.

 

Her tears, dried

Her smile, bright

Her life, changed

Her ambition, frightless

Her atittude, Fearless

Her soul, warm

Her dress, beautiful

 

After beliving.

 

Her goal, to inspire

Her purpose, to show you to live on
Her meaning, for you to be limitless
Her want, for you to do everything dreams see
Her need, for you not to restrict yourself with I can't
Her quote, time is only houred sand that starts again

Her dying wish, live full because you can because she did.

 

 

_Shaun Poet

Comments

Rojas

wow. this piece has wonderful structure. it is short and concise.

the spacing and choice of words were done careful, and it's evident.

i can see a life from beginning to end with struggle and hope at the same time.

 

sad, but inspiring. keep posting. very advanced poem.

 

best,

rojas

Shaun Poet

thanks for reading....

you words are much appreciated..

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