5-13-13

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46060
United States
40° 3' 15.282" N, 85° 57' 3.2112" W
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I counted my heartbeat
112 before
120 after a cigarette
So two at once = + 16
+ 24
+ 32
+ 40
until I get to 11
at once
and my heart spatters all on my RibCage

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