Love me as I love you

care for me as I care for you

Give me your all when your word is all you have

Let me help when all you want to do is be independent

Break down your wall you have built to keep me out

Show me that everything I do have a cause, show me there shouldnt be no doubt

Love me as I love you

Without you there will only be a drought

Trust me with your heart and let me give it forever glory

Show me that im wrong even when im right

Be my moon on a starry night

show me the way even after I lose my sight

Give me your love even if its all a lie.



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Beautiful. Makes me think of times when I've struggled. You translate that kind of emotion well. God speed

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