“The disappointment in life”

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35° 5' 37.8528" N, 89° 56' 4.7976" W

The girl looked back onto her life and saw that it wasn’t what she expected it to be.

Walking through her garden she picked up one rose from the bush and smelled it.

She lived alone in her home the girl was only 19.

A week ago she prayed with her grandma and in the prayer she asked her granddaughter to never give up in life.

The girl had achieved nothing in life all she did was hide in her rose garden.

Than again she had achieved something and that’s the love of God.

She twirled the rose around in her hand than she began to cry.

The tears from her weary eyes began to pour from her eyes, heart, and soul.

The tears meant that she had to give up the disappointment in her life and that was to stop the regret and focus on the future.

People will always look down and see some kind of disappointment; don’t be disappointed in life because it will turn into depression.

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