Evil subdued

Inside innocence is evil subdued
Patient and persistent just waiting to be renewed
To one's end the other is glued
Their contract is of a mutual promise
a new round always for an old Feud

Comments

Annette M Velasquez

4 years ago

Compact, direct, and clear. This poem has the effectiveness of unique rhyme, a philosophical, thought-provoking message and a style that is accessible to all. Truthful and original.

Oneofthechosenones

4 years ago

Thank you for your review and comments

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