Exhortation in Rhyme

She gasps for air 

With bloodred eyes 

A calm glare her only disguise 

 

Hiding behind 

A mask of hate 

Hitting rewind 

And closing the gate

 

Oh broken girl 

Reach out and see 

Love unfurled 

Beyond your dreams 

 

Look past your mind 

Sleep well tonight 

Have faith be blind 

To all but light 

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