The Blues

Wed, 06/29/2016 - 04:41 -- Clarisa

I'm feeling blue,

People avoid me like the flu.

I really wanted to be you,

But you told me to get a clue.

So after that experience I grew.

I'm glad you helped me breakthrough.

Because now I feel brand new

Now I know you're the wrong idol, YAHOO!

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gracieffler

7 years ago

"Because now I feel brand new

Now I know you're the wrong idol, YAHOO!"

 

If this is supposed to be about Robin Williams, it's really insensitive. 

Clarisa

7 years ago

Actually I wrote this poem years ago, it's not about Robin William's at all I don't know who that is as a matter of fact. But if I offended you in anyway I'm sorry. I wrote this poem for people who look up to someone, but they turn out not to be who they tought they were. 

Clarisa

7 years ago

Out of curiousity why did you think it was about him? I added this poem for people suffering from depression I never even tagged him in the poem, and the cause didn't say anything about him being involved?

gracieffler

7 years ago

"Because now I feel brand new

Now I know you're the wrong idol, YAHOO!"

 

If this is supposed to be about Robin Williams, it's really insensitive.

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