What is Proud

Tue, 04/30/2013 - 21:29 -- Kateira

So you think that you are better than me?
You think that you won’t stumble over the hurdles that were put on your path, or dip your feet in the lake that grows in your way before you realize that it is only a mirage. You think that you have worked harder and earned the right to walk this world with your head held high, looking down upon me as if I were the gum on your shoes. Well if I’m not worth your time, then you certainly are not capable of deserving mine. I come from a line of strong and proud people. No matter how dark we are we shine. We shine past the valley, and through the mountains down to the lakes. We stand up for ours and do whatever it takes. We know not what of but what can be, so the next tine that you feel the need to look at somebody, look up to me!!

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Dominic17

STRONG AND PROUD!

Kateira

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Kateira

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Kateira

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