criticism
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To promote their belief in salvation
They will present questions for the intellect
like a thirty second commercial
Signs will line the road reading
Got Jesus?
Jesus or Pizza, which one will you choose?
Those
who
never made
mistakes
had nothang
learnt in
life.
Nor
gather
any experience.
For Mistake
uncovers
many mysteries.
Most times
people
condone a torn
book đ
because it has
no
cover. However
it's contents
could heal
the world. Meanwhile a
fancy
backed book đ
may likely
When hopes start to disappoint you
Dejection drains the power out of you
Motivation dies deep inside the soul
When criticism shows up to console
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Exasperation flows all over me
When I hear them giggling behind me
It occurs to me that
They are happier than me
To make up for deficiencies
Lacking or discrepancies
To fix or make anew
What's broke and disagrees with you.
"But I haven't sinned!"
I hear you cry
"It went that way alone, awry!"
His mood was short
The transient feeling was impermanent
But it became plentiful and copious
He was now fragile and tenuous
the uncertainty of this precariousness
Drawing eyes is like creating my audience.
My audience that so generously
criticizes every one of my moves.
My audience that doesn't dare to train their gaze
off me.
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He asked for help -
they laughed.
He begged to be understood -
they ignored.
He screamed for attention -
they didn't give it.
There is a spray tan in the oval office.Â
I donât want to hear from the Tangerine Man about his wall.Â
The word âthemâ has a greater capacity to separate people than any wall.Â
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Can you see through the smog in the air
In which the sunâs bright light is dimming from space debris, but we do not care
Twilight's last gleaming, the only time the harsh pollution is hidden
eyes plastered up can't see
petty brained fucks encompass you and me
encircled and closed outside to in
crash that shabby ass shack to no end
Criticized constantly by your dad
Always comparing you to your brother,
He tears you down and makes you sad
The cry of a little baby,
The agony of young soul,
The brutality of life,
That streams down from souls,
All this can be repaired,
Walk to that beggar,
Speak to that pregnant teenage girl,
âYou need to study harder.â
âYou need to get better grades.â
âYou need to try harder.â
âYou need to work out more.â
âYou need to lose weight."
âYou need to be more outgoing.â
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A is for adultery and
B is for bitchesâ the
Cunts that
Donât know how to keep their legs shut.
Egged on by eager men,
A is for a dirty girl,
Banished from the
Church, a
Devilâs child,
Excluded because of an unlawful
Fuck.
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Dear you,
bold,
innovative,
gifted,
the brightest star.
find fault?
Think you can hang with the finest.
Hah!
You may wake up each and every day wondering what will today be like. Will it be better than yesterday or worse. You may get bullied, talked about, picked on, talked down, criticized, or etc but I just wanna let you know its apart of life.
You may wake up each and every day wondering what will today be like. Will it be better than yesterday or worse. You may get bullied, talked about, picked on, talked down, criticized, or etc but I just wanna let you know its apart of life.
Catholic school does a number on a child,
He never knows what to believe.
Dear God, that woman in the habit she rapped my fingers time and time again when Iâd take the Lordâs name in vain,
A test score does not determine my capabilities;
how quickly I can bubble in answers does not measure my intelligence.
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I am not a statistic,
another paycheck,
a number.
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It's not easy I know. Going where nobody likes to go. A touchy subject that's for sure. But do you even know her? The struggles she's faced? The heartbreaks and pain?
