Poems from brookesteen13
Hello! I'm a beginner poet trying to improve. I would love some constructive criticism so that I can develop some skills. I tend to write what I feel
Wishin there was some sort of potion
To take to stop all of this emotion
And make the world stop its motion
Memories are equally a gift as they are a curse
Masqueraded as a limousine to hide the hearse
One hides the most prized of possessions
As...
Her trials
Are piles
Of books on the shelf
She waits for someone to come and help
Will they ever care enough to open its binding
And begin...
Don’t you see?
You can’t fall in love with me
Everything I touch I break eventually
So you might as well leave
Before they catch you at the...
If you wanted me you shoulda said so
Do you not see me here down below
You helped put me in the hole
So now you better know
That your words...