Poems from Madeline71100
I'm from California. I love any form of writing but my favorite is poetry. I'm 15 years old. I get a lot of comments about being so young but I don't think your writing should be judged on what you look like, how old you are, etc. Instead it should be judged on the emotion that lives in the writing. I've only been writing poetry for about two years now. I started after my dad passed away and I've slowly improved since then, however, I still have much to improve on. That's a huge majority of why I'm on here. So, Please let me know any advice or suggestions you may have. Thank You.
The way the words flow from your lips,
almost as if you remembered our kiss.
Those long nights flew by,
yet you're the only one who felt...
And the way we once were,
still thrived in the past.
But the mistakes we had made,
were still in the back of our minds.
And the sudden...
It began as a shadow,
Flowing in the rays of the sun,
Hidden behind a meaningless form,
It held together false hopes and dreams.
But...
The dim light casts shadows across the room,
softening the sad features her face held,
for in the corner laid a picture frame with...
The weight of denial sits on my shoulders,
adding pounds to an already crumbling structure,
must I know the details of your far away...