YOWO?

Is it YOWO or YOLO?

One can live in one's writing.

Hopes, dreams, heirings of greivances

make up a life.

Emotions, passions, vices, are portrayed

just like having a wife.

Who you want to kill, who you want to keep alive,

cut through the ice like a knife.

So one lives through a careful arrangement of words,

and one should treat writing a piece like

after submission, the computer was going to crash.

So make it count make it matter,

please don't make it lyrical trash.

No cliche, no needless repetition, no iggy,

dont write like a silly

person who is only driven to write for a scholarship

because even if you are, 

make that last write a trip, 

through the jungle of your mind.

I have to go,

but please let me ask again,

Is it YOWO or YOLO?

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