You're Like

The roar of the world beyond the water
Thats what you sound like
Whispers and murmurs floating on waves
Thats what you sound like
Breathing in water weighing down lungs
Thats what you feel like
Touch like a grip of fire and ice
Thats what you feel like
Bursting with life but resembling emptiness
Thats what you look like
Hollow shells filled only with water
Thats what you look like
Bitter with hopelessness and change
Thats what you taste like
More salt that the ocean contains
Thats what you taste like
Fish and their endless waste
Thats what you smell like
Concentrated and full of confusion
Thats what you smell like

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