Your Disappointments & Me

 

First of all I’d like to thank you all for your kindness 

A sophisticated type of stupid ignorant blindness 

Superficial

Naive

God I grieve

And then you go off and tell me you gotta leave?

Please

You worsen 

Your not even person to person 

Your free 

Do you really think you're more super duper superb than me? 

It isn't trouble- you're a narcissist

Ignorant 

And in a dire need of a transfigurement 

That is the gist

You're sorry- dad I know I’ll add it to the list 

Consider it dismissed

I’ve forgiven every fact

Reaction

Verbal blow

So you know 

You taught to me grow each time you woe-d 

Oh 

But it’s my turn, wow 

You raise your brow

And screamed like steam 

About every “broken dream” 

Which I esteemed-ly schemed now

“You won’t start” 

“You don’t swim”

“Your pathetic”

Yes dad I get it 

“Entitled to nothing” 

And at the end of the day you're the one I should be trusting?

The answers no,

I gave you all the chances you chose to throw

Molasses slow 

My ass is slow 

Stop kidding you don't even know 

Time doesn’t owe anybody no-

Oh-kay next on the list 

I wish I could make it a competition 

A dollar for every single “stop and listen” 

Your position is shit 

I petition to put this non-beautician on exhibition

Here’s my diction 

Your a dick 

Now that's you’re commission 

He’s another aggressive 

Possessive 

Manic-depressive 

The last ones the stress of my expressive 

He’s actually quite a happy fool 

You were nice 

a story 

Undeserving but we’re cool 

Let's break the ice 

I give it no second thought

Finally delight 

My advice? 

Should’ve closed the door

Don’t count thrice 

Shut up and just act right 

Here’s my honest sacrifice 

The minute you get it

Don't sweat it

Leap to quit the bene…  

-fit

It’s betta to bet on a existentialist 

I’m sending your letters of discontentedness 

Dissatisfaction

Back to yourself

Your the one in need of serious help

 

This poem is about: 
Me
My family

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