You offer me, I give you

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94132
United States
37° 43' 5.304" N, 122° 29' 10.8564" W

come with me, I'll take you to a better place
dreams to reality, where imagination has it's space
here you can come, be yourself, speak your mind
don't gotta watch your step, a field with no mines
get lost in your touch, breathe us in, take your time
this is love, not a rhyme, look through me and you'll find
everything you dream of, right here on a platter
no physics, no limits, whats at hand it the only matter
cause i'm not her, I know she did you wrong
promised you grammys, turned out the tune didn't match the song
so separate Ms.right from wrongs, fly with me till we gone,I'll love you right, love you hard, love you strong...

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