You Killed Me....

Sat, 11/16/2013 - 15:35 -- TiannaE

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I was alive when i met you.

Alive but cautious because I always feared death...

feared what it would be like if you left....

You made me live reckless on the edge..

and the times i spent with you....

i couldnt get them out my head...

I was alive.

I was alive.

You killed me and i wept.

Happiness died , my smile became cold

My soul was no longer ignited...

and you didnt even hear my cry...

to wrapped up in your lies that failed to realise my demise

You killed me..

or rather part of me died.... with you...

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Quiknodda17

Its gone be ok time is the best healer to a hurting heart. Dont be afraid to smile sometimes that alone will open other gates to happiness. Your poem was great by the way

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