You and me
You and me.
Standing there in ecstacy
Hoping you see this burning passion of flame inside of me.
Hoping you have a fire too
Standing there in pretty blue
I love holding your hand and kissing you but sometimes it's a hard thing to do.
It's a dream that seems to good to be true.
Like someday you'll vanish and I'll be forced to forget you.
Now thats something I just can't risk.
That's a way that I can't live
I hope you understand the complex feeling inside of me.
For now kissing you and you touching me.
That's something I like to see.
You and Me.
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Snow in Autumn
This one was lovely! You have amazing love poems! This one reminds me of my own poem, "Tattoo" if you'd want to check it out :)
I also have a poetry group I'm starting up called Diverse Poetry if you're interested in joining. We would love to have you there to share feedback with!
Magick_Candie
This is so beautiful. I would have you read my poetry because it is quite the opposite of yours. You could try writing for you significant lover's point of view or a letter to your lover as poetry. This is my personal opinion and I like your work
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