You and Me

You will never go thru my experiences, nor feel the pain that I’ve endured
Likewise goes for you as well, your lessons learned still we’re scorned

A journey you and I, the whole world opened up their eyes
Every step on the rocks to remain silent and then cry

You see, the pain is there but differently individually
Our minds and hearts, our body, we’re still battling

The hurt reminds us of where we once saw ourselves
Aches under feet, you should be proud of yourself

Life is a dream that only you and I can see
Amongst the suffering you’re reminded, cause you breathe

This is just one part of life, then there’s Love, Sadness and Pride
A list with plenty of categories, a line drawn for you and I

So continue to live and don’t fault no one for your path
Look to you left and look to your right, what you had someone now has

We are each other’s teachers and students who learn
If one knew everything about life, then who do we turn?


MVP-Most Valuable Poet

We are each other’s teachers and students who learn is the essence of what makes this poem driven
all of us learn from each other-thats how one grows
keep writing and expand your ideas
great job


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