Thu, 05/16/2013 - 13:55 -- Mkaso


United States
33° 42' 50.6016" N, 116° 13' 7.1364" W

The glow you left
After you left my room
Lingered on like
The smell of a perfume.

Your heart is tender,
Yet your words are vicious,
But when it is all said and done,
I look into your eyes and fall into a deep hypnosis.

I wish i can have you,
Physically with me all day,
But instead you are in my head,
Along with my thoughts, wants,
Desires, wishes and the others put away.


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