You

You take a drink


Then all of your common sense takes a sink


Nothing you say together has a link


And OMG does your breath stink


You personally reek like a skunk


Makes me stagger back and ask WTF?!


The things you say makes me wish I was dead


Just cause the terrible shit you've said


You worry about guys breaking my heart


But you are the only one that mainly tears me apart


Sometimes your the reason I think of suicide


I'm tired of being on this hard painful ride


I put you first and I'm last


Worrying about you all day everyday


Think about myself? No Way!


Accused of everything when I've done nothing


I go to school so I can have something


Am I someone?


Once you told me I was No one


A 'waste of breath' I think it was


I just want to make you proud


At my graduation I want to hear you scream loud


But all that is going away


I'm not sure I'm going to make it to that day

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i sense emotional drive when you wrote this poem

it feels like a cry when you express your thoughts

beautifully written piece

let's collaborate on a poem if you like

 

*side note-correct awa, you meant to say away ;)

SimplyMe95

Thank you and yea I was pretty upset when I wrote it.....I write better when im not my happiest most times

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