you

 

moving on is hard to do

when the moving on still points towards you

it’s hard when i am alone

and all i see is you

it’s hard when it feels hopeless

because i put all my hope in you

but the hope; 

it has died

as i have died, a thousand times 

because still,

all i see 

is you 

This poem is about: 
Me
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Comments

azco

aye, beautiful poem.
haha actually, i wrote the complete opposite of this poem yesterday. 
but the theme is same.... here you're still holdin' onto to to that person/thing

n in my poem, I just let that person go n set myself free.haha

cucumoi

Updates your diopters

kellllseyy

honestly have no idea what that is

Lovewhat

put a candle .... and don't get cold

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