Sat, 04/01/2017 - 22:37 -- MonaEva

The stars don't seem so far away,

    when you remember yesterday.

The way the moon shined,

    and the feeling of a wish.

The beams of light fluttering down,

    a kiss.


The wind's soft caress,

    and your personal duress.

You stare up at the sky,

    with a smile so bright.

There is someone watching over you,



A shooting comet cross the sky,

    reminiscent of a loved one's cry.

The world can seem so dark at times,

   and nature is the prettiest sight.

So when you're taking your last breath,

    admire the sky's soft light.


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