yes i have been blessed

yes i have been blessed with this life that has been given to me

but i've been so stressed that its killin me

i fell like i have been deprived of the one thing that s mine

and that is my  dream to susceed

but now its hard for me to even breath

your told you have to go to school to learn

but lear what

now im 18 and a senior nd dont know a damn thing about life

 i thought i was expoed to learn

i cant hardly stand on my own two feet

im feeling like im traped and straped down

 falling deeer and deeper into this stupid rabbits whole

i know this cant just be me

how am i exposed to suceed

i dont even know how to write check

i mean schools are ment to teach

but they dont tell you after your done that you need all this information

that they dont provide

how am i exposed to srtive

then they let you leave on your own choice when your 16

and dont tell you you need your diploma to have a job

even fliping burgers at mcdondalds

i mean shit come on

its allright tho ill suceed

schools just need to learn how to teach

 

 

 

 

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