Would you be mine?

Fri, 09/06/2013 - 21:36 -- Yanna

My heart feels like magic,With my mind like static.I feel like I've been rebornI feel like a newborn Until you are attained,My heart's in disdain .Calm days and sweet wordsmaking me a hazard. I shall not say goodbyefor I can not deny,How your beauty is heldIt leaves me in a spell. It might be a bit odd,but you have no flaws.You're lovely and smallleaving me enthralled. It's happened so fast,But I want this to last.Tender bliss is all I need,Just hoping this isn't greed. It is all so quick,but I hope this sticks.Why don't you agreeI hope you agreeto be mine, lovely.

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