A World with Peace

Tue, 04/29/2014 - 21:45 -- gbrunk

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When the world finds peace, the world will stop

As far as hiearchy goes there will be nothing at the top

Level playing ground with nothing obstructing the goal

We will actually find time to stop and let the ball role

Setting aside our differences will hurt our pride

Those who sacrifice their lives will indirectly guide

When caring and sacrificing is number one on our list

Everyone one will be doctors rather than having a few specialists

War is a major cause of discomfort and unsettlement

For selfish reasons you have the opponents arm bent

Power is an addictive quality because you are never content

Loving others for who they are rather than ponder on torment

This is an ideal world, not blind, rather seeing

This is hard to attain so we need a higher being

Comments

Tanssia

This reminds me of that song by Nickleback 'If everyone cared'. It's really good you should listen to it. I loved this poem. Keep writing^^

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