World is Falling

Wed, 09/24/2014 - 11:22 -- jerlee

My world is falling

Full of thorns

Why can't you hear

Where can I find

Where can I find

Warmth in a field of thorns

When you're embrace is sour

It's a pain...

My world is falling

Tell me what is wrong

What have I've done

Don't look into my eyes

Forget my pain

Forget my love

Fall into a field

A field of thorns

my world is falling

My world is falling

My world is fading

Where should I search

Open air is to wide

At the end,

Tragedy was the beginning

Comments

Michael Song

Jer to pro! 

jerlee

:) <3

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