Won't Leave

never again will I trust someone who promises they "wont leave"

they end up leaving regardless of the futile promises they make

leaving me in their dust

crying 

begging

screaming

for just one more chance

but they never stay

never again will i trust someone who promises to never leave

Comments

Wired6

Hi Sucidal4Ever,how are you?

I like this pen.

Great truthful intensity.

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Sucidal4Ever

i could be better, thank you. I wrote it a couple months back. 

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