without you

Mon, 03/31/2014 - 02:13 -- Baceves

i don't remember when it happened.

We were walking, and talking, and suddenly without cause of attention we were holding hands.

I don't remember when it happened.

We were sitting, and we looked at eachother and I felt it. 

I felt you all around me. 

I knew I couldn't live without you.

For I loved you.

I don't remember when it happened.

I saw you kneel on one knee and pull out a beautiful ring.

I said yes, and you kissed me.

I don't remember when it happened.

The doctor told me the news, you smiled.

We were expecting in June.

I don't remember when it happened.

Our baby girl grew up so quick.

She just turned six.

I can't live without precious.

I have to add her to the list.

I don't remember when it happened.

That car hit us so quick.

When I woke up I couldn't find you. 

I searched for precious.

The doctor told me the news.

She was gone too. 

It was true. I seriously can't live without the both of you.

I don't remember when it happened.

I can't remember anything.

 

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