Will I Succeed

Fri, 03/15/2013 - 12:57 -- 2SMC3


United States
37° 50' 30.3252" N, 106° 1' 1.1892" W

Who's going to succeed
paranoid from all the weed,
trying to get by
while staying high
making it closer to die
but will I fly
up into the sky
with the real "G"
or will he just see me
‘strugglin’ to be
all that I can't be

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