Who knows

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93060
United States
34° 24' 32.0796" N, 119° 4' 9.3576" W
93060
United States
34° 24' 32.0796" N, 119° 4' 9.3576" W
Sunny
 
Happy smile
 
Always love my masters
 
Just waiting a hug
 
Suddenly a big stick coming through
 
I feeling my world had something wrong
 
Bang, likes thunder on my body
 
I can't stand up anymore 
 
Still love my masters
 
Don't know why
 
Close eyes
 
Raining
 
晴天
 
開心的微笑 
 
總是愛我的主人 
 
只是在等待一個熱情擁抱 
 
突然,一個大棒子重重地揮過來 
 
感覺到我的世界似乎有什麼不對勁 
 
蹦,像是雷的打在我的身上 
 
我再也站不起來了 
 
仍然愛我的主人 
 
不知道為什麼
 
閉上眼睛 
 
雨天

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