Whiter Than Snow

Location

84523
United States
39° 5' 42.1368" N, 111° 14' 12.5088" W

Be like the rain that pours down from the clouds
Crystal clear and pure.
Not like dirt from the ground as everyone steps on

Some leaving a trail of footprints on the ground,

Not caring about the mess that was left behind.

*Inspired by Psalms 51:7*

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Be like the rain that pours down from the clouds
Crystal clear and pure. -these verses captivated me

nice haiku-it's amazing how people take it for granted-never took the timeout to see the beauty of snow

thank you for sharing it

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