WHEN I DRENCHED INTO HER BEAUTIFUL EYES

WHEN I DRENCHED INTO HER BEAUTIFUL EYES
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I, always, felt alone and insecure, while wandering in the world;
The, depreviaton revealed inside my heart, told the untold miseries.

Miseries, that were never understood, in all corners of beauty;
Beauty, that was everlasting, where ever I went, but remained thirsty.

Promised were made, oaths were taken, but I remained incomplete;
I went, I came..! I saw, I left, Beauty faded.

My return, my reunion, my faith, my belief boast trust;
I wandered in search of beauty; beauty must muster courage.

With, unshakeable faith in beauty,
I remained always misunderstood everywhere;
My Lord , and finally, I reached at your trustworthy castle.

Found myself, with an answer, that was never known before;
Reached, saw, and drenched into her beautiful Eyes, became Immortal.

Noor Muhammad Shah

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