"What's Up With That ?" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 21/6/2006

Location

United Kingdom

I Could Write About Women Every Single Day ... !!!
Because Their Ways Leave My Head ... SPINNING ... !!!

So Let's Start THIS At The Beginning ... !!!
You See Her From .................... Afar ........................
As She Walks Into Your Local Bar ...

Then Your Heart MISSES . . . A Beat ...
Because She Looks So SWEET ... !!!

She Moves With Graceful CLASS ...
And Has Got A SEXY ... " SMILE " ... !!!

Then You Exchange A Glance As You TRY To Catch Her Eye ...

But Then Your Hopes Are DASHED Because You SEE Her Man ...
But QUICKLY It's APPARENT Their Relationship's ... " A SHAM " ... !!!

I've Met SO MANY In My Life I'd Like To Have Stand By My Side ...
Some Have Tried But When I FIND That They're Inclined ...
To Act As If I Am ... THEIR BITCH ... ?!!!?

You KNOW The Coup They're QUICKLY ................ "Ditched" .... !!!
Now NOT ALL Women Are Like THIS MANY Just Make BAD CHOICES ... !!!

They PICK A Man ...
Who's Got THE CHAT or PLENTY of CASH ... !!!

Then Get ENGAGED Before You Can SAY ...

.... "Don't rush in babe, take time, ease back !"

Come On Now Girls What's Up With THAT ... ?!?

Now SOME Ladies Get TRAPPED ...
By ..... " Pregnancy " ......
Just CHECK The Stats I'm Talking FACTS ... !!!

SINGLE Mums With Daughters and Sons ...
While DADDY's OUT THERE Looking For FUN ... !!!!!

I'm Saying Girls What's Up With THAT ... ?!?

It's NOT Easy To Find TRUE LOVE ESPECIALLY When You Are Young ... !!!

If You Are FIT Girls TRUST In THIS ...
Some Men Will YES Try ... ANYTHING ....
To Make You S P R E A D Those Juicy Lips ... !!!

EVEN Buy ... ENGAGEMENT Rings ...

So As I Said Before PLEASE Girls Be SURE ...
of Who It Is You're Dealing With ... !!!
If You Want A STRONG Relationship ... !!!!!

I Guess Some Girls Are Just INNOCENT ...
Or May Just Be ... Somewhat NAIVE ...

Well THIS Can Lead To Men Who FEED ...
of Women Who FEAR Being ...................... "Lonely" .... !!!

Doing Things ALONE Is TOUGH I KNOW ... !!!
But Being With The WRONG Someone Can Prove To Be EVERYTHING But Fun ... !!!!!!

And This Is Why I've Taken Time ...
To Write These Thoughts In Simple Rhyme ...
LISTEN UP Ladies When You Are YOUNG ...
ESPECIALLY YES You PRETTY ONES ...
Be WARY of Men With SLICK Lyrics ...
Who PROMISE To Give You EVERYTHING ... !!!
They May Just Leave You In A Fix ... !!!

As The Story UNFOLDS When YOU Get OLD ...
You May Just END UP On Your OWN ... ?
And Have REGRETS About The MEN You Chose To REJECT ...
Who TRIED Their BEST To LOVE YOU NOT Just Give You SEX ... !!!

There Are LOADS of THEM Who'll FILL Your Head ...
With Hopes And Dreams To SHARE Your Bed ... !!!

REMEMBER That Cos THAT's A FACT ... !!!
And REMEMBER THIS ... DECENT Men Who YOU RESIST ...
WON'T Be There When You Want THEIR KISS ...
That's NORMALLY The Way of Things ... !!!

If The Man You CHOOSE Gives You ABUSE ...
But YOU STAY With Him There's NO EXCUSE ... !!!!
In THE END I'm AFRAID You're Likely To LOSE ... !!!

ESPECIALLY If There's ANOTHER MAN ...
Offering You ... A DIFFERENT Stance ...
Like Trying To Find Loves' Promised Land ... !!!

It's NOT A Crime To TRY New Guys ...
If Your Relationship's NOT Feeling Right ... !!!!!!

We DON'T ALL Want To Just SPREAD Your Thighs ...
DON'T Get Me WRONG THAT Would Be NICE ... !!!!!
On The FIRST NIGHT Or ... Down The Line .....................................................

But ONLY AFTER Spending Time ...
SHARING Thoughts INSIDE Our Minds ...

About The DELIGHTS We Want In Life ...
ACTIONS Speak MUCH Louder Than WORDS ... !!!!!
But The Two Things COMBINED Can Help Things WORK ...

What I'm Saying Ladies Is Play CAREFULLY ... !!!!

DON'T Just Take The FIRST Man To Say ...
... " Lets Get Engaged ! " ... Or ... " Let's Have A Baby ! "

You May Be Making A BIG MISTAKE ...
He May Be SAYING That Because He's AFRAID ...
of Being ............................................... ALONE .......
Or of .................................................... LOSING You .... !!!

If He Says He LOVES YOU ...
And You BELIEVE That's TRUE ...

Then BE With Him And Do Your Do ... !!!!!
But THINK of The Things He Puts You Through ... !!!
BEFORE You Make Your Move ... !!!!

If The LOVE That You Give ...
is Just A SLAUGHTER To The ... " Lamb " ...

But You CHOOSE To Stay ...
EVEN Though You Feel ... "TRAPPED" ...

I've Just Got To Ask THIS ...........

........ "What's Up With That ?" .......

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