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what makes me tick is what is makes my mom sweat
Everytime I see her come home at 1 a.m.,
I know that I need to do something so she doesn't have to work into her golden years
and I know she has blessed me with the opportunity to do that
I mean I'm in the United States in the in the 21st century
and I'm not stupid
I have intelligence because she put me in an opportunity to have them have it
so yeah I do for my mom and I do for myself because I know that I don't want to do what she does and she sure as hell doesn't want me to do what she does

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