What was that?
What was that
That was roof over blazing hot sun
Without that life is no fun
With that life was groomed
Without that the world seem doomed
That is gone so far away
I hope that could take me away
What was that?
That was my dad
Your brave princess is here
You left me thats not fair
I love you
And will go throught the path given by you
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DOYIN TRACEY
I can tell that it is a great poem....but somehow I got lost in trying to connect with you through your words...that I fail to find exactly what you mean....i think I would get it better and understand it better if I could just find a constant line of thoughts and feelings you are trying to portray. But I think it's a great piece and at the same time...i can't help but feel like you cut yourself short at some point..and that you still have more to say on the subject...either on this same Poem...or others you will write in future...and I can't wait to read them all...❤