what makes me tick

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There are a few things that make me tick

invisibility, inability, vulnerability 

being invisible is dreadful because you're voiceless

being unable is hateful because you're useless

Being vulnerable is the worst of them all because you're powerless

greed, deceit, heartlessness

being greedy is normal but it makes me tick when people get so absorbed in it

being deceitful is living but it makes me tick when people take things too far

Being heartless is the worst of the worst but it makes me tick 

tick 

tick 

when people do not think twice of their actions 

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