What I Have Done

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61376
United States
41° 33' 37.818" N, 89° 35' 14.9352" W

Do you ever look back and see what is done,
The time and effort, and it seems though nothing's won?
Fight and struggle, but it's already done,
It's already over, filled with your own shun.
Others' advice is to let it be done,
but you won't let it be gone.
I wish it would be done.
What have I done?

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Comments

ramim681

This poem I just came up with, and poetry is not really my strong suit. By putting some emotions into there I feel like I made something.

savigirl14

It is simple but I think it's good. I like your emotion in it.

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