What does this sound like to you

Sat, 04/06/2013 - 13:37 -- method

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21213
United States
39° 19' 4.674" N, 76° 33' 58.1832" W

No choice in the matter
Unfortunately birthed into it
Those who proceeded
Choose to waste away with their gift
Now the present is here
Forgiveness is needed not blame
Based on what's heard
This will not rerun, cycle can be changed
Holes dug so deep
God like effort is needed to rise
Only bare necessity options given
Without faith you don't survive
Education isn't valued
When people cant eat
Hunger is the first motivation
The second is sleep
Everything's different for everyone
So perception for one may not be for two
There's nothing new under the sun
No right or wrong , what does this sound like to you?

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